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Laura Dore Pencil Exercise

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This is just a sketch,I'm not ready to work on a full body Pin Up.
Pencils: 2h,HB,2B,4B,6B
Image size
1328x1518px 1019.8 KB
Make
Canon
Model
MP130
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I can tell from this image that you are experienced with shading, it looks near enough realistic! This is an amazing bust of the character.

Most emphasis is put on the hair, which is really well-drawn. You've mastered the shading on the hair perfectly! Not many people can top this style like you did.

Not much originality in terms of style but the concept is very unique, however.

You could have used slightly more contrast between Black and White and the nose is somewhat offset from the direction she's facing.

Other than that, it's a really nice picture! I hope you work on the full body version soon. If you ever do, drop a comment on my profile!